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RE: Second Chance Romance

in #fiction-s26wk511 days ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance

Dear @ariful2, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.5/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.6/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.8/1
Total8.8/10

Feedback

  • You took the story too far off the prompt for instance

Dennis, who left this city, has a lot of pain and emotions inside him, but maybe Danish doesn't know that.

There is no such hint in the prompt.

  • You started your story with intro and all which is a big no, no in fiction niche. If your story had a little more touch and twists of fiction, it could be a great one, imho.

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