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RE: Second chance romance

in #fiction-s26wk520 days ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance

Dear @johnmitchel, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation1/1Good
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.4/10

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  • You started well by recalling the incidents but soon ventured into present. If you had stayed in the past the result would be different.

  • By the way, who is Jenna?

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Thank you for the review on my post. I mixed up the Jenny name to Jenna.😂😂. I will edit that part.

Thanks very much.

No worries, now what's done is done.