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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w5: Second chance romance
Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.5/10 |
You have a wonderful story here but seem to have missed a point or two. The demand of the prompt is to go back into the flashback when Jenny left the cabin and they two came out.
To be honest, I was expecting a better story built from you.
Greetings. That being the case, my dear friend, there is nothing to object to about the rating... The truth is that I did not work directly on the Flashback, because if I had understood that it was the theme, the story I wrote would have been very different. Instead, I thought of those memories as a reason to return... Anyway, my bad.
Thank you for the assessment and for the expectations. For me, that's an indication that although I sometimes make mistakes, I mostly do well, that is, I think I'm on the path to where I want to go.
Blessings.
Thanks for understanding and since this is just one day left so I opened the secret otherwise I would not give you the hint.