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RE: Second chance romance

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Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance

Dear @mahmud552, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation1/1Good
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.6/10

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  • you have understood the prompt well and tried a good one.

  • If you emphasized the discussion aspects during the heated argument in Dennis's cabin and used techniques like stressing the reason after they came out from his office, this would be a top story.

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Thank you very much for reviewing my post.