Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | |
| Presentation | 1/1 | |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | |
| Total | 9.4/10 |
You tried well but never mentioned the scenario where it was supposed to start from, the office cabin where Dennis and Jenny had the fight.
You tried to go into the flashback but your focus was on too many things rather than concentrating on Dennis and Jenny.