Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
---|---|---|
Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | |
Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | |
Presentation | 0/9/1 | |
My observation | 0/9/1 | |
Total | 9.3/10 |
This story missed the impact when you started with intro which kills the fictional line.
Your story lacked the conversation and melodrama otherwise it was in line.
Thank you so much for reviewing my post so nicely 🤍