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RE: Second chance Romance.

in #fiction-s26wk58 days ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance

Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3
Presentation0/9/1
My observation0/9/1
Total9.3/10

Feedback

  • This story missed the impact when you started with intro which kills the fictional line.

  • Your story lacked the conversation and melodrama otherwise it was in line.

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Thank you so much for reviewing my post so nicely 🤍