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RE: Second Chance Romance (Spanish)
Hello my dear friend, Your story is very beautiful, You have realistically portrayed Dennis' emotions and inner weakness. The part where Jenny gradually softens from suspicion also leaves a mark on the reader. If you just shorten a few sentences, it would be easier to read.
Hello, @mamun123456.
I was worried to make a good story and to develop the characters correctly. Whoever who has gone through a difficult relationship may be suspicious for the next time with the same person or another.
I´ll think of shortening the sentences.
Thank you.