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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @mamun123456, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The emotional core was there, but you didn't take risks to elevate the story. |
| Total | 9.45/10 |
Feedback
- You wrote a heartfelt and relatable story that matches the theme well but you repeated Dennis's loneliness and regret several times. Instead of deepening his character, it felt like the same thought circling back.