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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @josepha, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | The flow was smooth and easy to follow, though I felt a bit more suspense could have made it stronger. |
| Total | 9.35/10 |
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- You introduced Dennis's loneliness at the beginning, but you didn't carry that theme strongly throughout the story. His inner emptiness could have influenced his actions more deeply.