Dear @ahmneska, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.3/5 | Satisfactory |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | The story felt a bit rushed. |
| Total | 8.9/10 |
Feedback
- I was expecting more depth in the emotional conflict: what exactly did Dennis say that hurt Jenny so deeply? What inner struggle did Jenny go through before forgiving him? Showing those details would make the reconciliation feel more real and earned.