Dear @emishael60, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.8/5 | Excellent |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 1/1 | You made Dennis's change believable by showing it through actions, which stood out strongly. |
| Total | 9.6/10 |
Feedback
- I really enjoyed reading your story because it expands well on the given narrative. Well done!