Dear @mohammadfaisal, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.85/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Excellent |
| My observation | 0.95/1 | You diverged by changing the breakup cause (stealing Jenny's work rather than just a heated argument), but I think that was a smart twist. |
| Total | 9.5/10 |
Feedback
- I really enjoyed reading this piece but with a bit more tension and emotional depth, it could have been outstanding.