Dear @shahidalinaz, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The resolution came faster and easier than expected |
| Total | 9.35/10 |
Feedback
- I really felt the loneliness you showed in Dennis's life. You made it clear that even with success, he was incomplete without Jenny, and that aligned well with the original narrative but the flashback argument was a big part of the prompt, and you skipped over it instead of weaving it into the story.