Dear @abdulmomin, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.85/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | The story feels repetitive at times. |
| Total | 9.2/10 |
Feedback
- You followed the basic background, but your story felt predictable and missed opportunities for depth. The conflict was too shallow and the dialogue lacked emotions.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review my post, and I wish you all the best. I will try to participate with more quality posts in the future.