Second chance romance

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Second chance romance

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Sometimes people have everything but still there is loneliness in their life, Same it happens to Dennis. Today Dennis is big name in corporate business, He had achieved everything in his life which might be dream for others.

He was livingluxury life, a beautiful bunglow at prime location, luxury car, successful career but he still feels loneliness, sad , empty space in his life.

One day, he sat at office cabin in evening time. He was in deep thinking & grief which transported back in that day when he was working with his fellow worker Jenny.

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They were in relationship but on that day to take about something, Dennis argued with Jenny with high tone and walked out, Another day Jenny left office and broke all relationship with him because Dennis' behaviour was very rude.

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Dennis was remembering that day and was weeping and blaming himself for that fight because he knew, he did wrong with Jenny but due to ego, He did not contact her but still he loves her and missing her badly.

One day, He will about to go for meeting for new project and when he entered room, he became shocked to see Jenny after a long time. Jenny was project head

It was coincidence, professional meeting but Dennis was happy to see her after a long time. They start to work on project and Jenny is maintaining spaceand taking him professionaly because she was hurted by him.

Dennis was trying to find a way to talk her and make her realise that how much he loves her and he is sorry for that day.

One day due to grace of God, Dennis got an opportunity, actually both were coming from meeting and weather was cloudy and suddenly rain has been started and He stopped driving and parked a cara side of road. There was tea restuarant so here is conversation:

Dennis:- Jenny, If you don't mind, Will you like to have a coffee with me ? Till then rain will be stop .

Jenny:- Okay, I don't mind .

Both were entered in restaurant and Dennis ordered a Coffe and said -

Dennis- Waiter for me normal coffe and for ma'am cappuccino with extra coffee shot

Jenny- Oh ! you still remember my taste?

Dennis- I remember all your favourite things and likes, dislike, Jenny !!

Jenny - By the way, Congratulations for your success, I have read many articles of your succes . It is commendable that you have achieved everything.

Dennis- Thanks but I did not celebrate my success with anyone yet !! 😔

Jenny- Why? You must have many friends, or Girl friend after all you are Big name.

Dennis- Jenny! I have everything but my life is still empty without you. I am very sorry for that day, I wept many times but realisation was bit late and then I tried to find you but I could not get your number or clue ..

Jenny- You hurted me a lot. I loved you truly..

Dennis- I understand, Please give me chance , I want to spend my whole life with you.

He knee down and proposed Jenny again

Jenny- I am also sorry, I should not have been went out from your life.

Both stood up and hugged eachother and cleared all confusions.

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Both are planning to get marry in next month. Dennis was very lucky that he got an second chance for his love and also he could say sorry because he hurted her. Now confusion is clear.They will be happy married couple soon.

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Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance

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Story start to finish4.6/5Okay
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Presentation0.9/1Okay
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