You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: SC S26-w6 : Two-timing

in #fiction-s26wk65 days ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing

Dear @jyoti-thelight, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness3/3good
Presentation1/1Good
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.5/10

Feedback

  • Your story sounds great but it deviated way too much from the prompt of the contest.

  • I thought John would use that parcel as an excuse to go back to Tina because he was tempted towards her or maybe avoid it to save his current relationship.

Moderated by: @dove11