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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing
Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.7/5 | |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | |
| Total | 9.4/10 |
Your story had a good theme but it lacked proper conversation.
I am confused why would anyone tell her intention in writing as if she knew that John will feel tempted due to her behavior? Conversation is normal among the co passengers and no one has to give an explanation for that.
Thank you so much for your verification