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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing

in #fiction-s26wk64 days ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing

Dear @bijoy1, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.5/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness3/3Good
Presentation1/1Good
My observation0.8/1Fair
Total9.3/10

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  • Your theme was good but you kept repeating the basics and John never reached to the conclusion.

  • Your story missed the thrill, romance and fiction besides the conversation which is lifeline of this niche.

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Thanks for telling.