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RE: Desafío Steemit S26-w6: Dos tiempos

in #fiction-s26wk64 days ago
Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing

Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness3/3
Presentation1/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.6/10

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  • Your story was closer to the theme but to be frank it sounded like a romantic story and had no touch of lust which is basic of two timing.

  • Two timing is nothing about people looking for long lasting relationship but just an act of infidelity and forget everything. You tried well though.

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¡Holaaa amigo!🤗

Te confieso que redactar esta historia, me costó mucho, porque no hay manera de que comprenda la mentalidad de un infiel jajaja, pero de igual manera disfruté desafirme, ya que así voy rompiendo barreras que limitan mi pluma.

Te agradezco mucho tu evaluación... Un fuerte abrazo💚