Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing
Dear @soulfuldreamer, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.85/5 | Close |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Fair enough |
| Total | 9.75/10 |
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Yes, human psychology is all about kicks of lust in situations like these. John was almost there, and Tina could have gone further too, but maybe she knew John was married to her cousin. Probably we the Asians don't accept it openly but we aren't different from our western counterparts.
Two-timing is an intense feeling of desire and anticipation leading to an uncertain situation. John was almost on the verge. You painted his mind beautifully. A little more conversation between the two and you could be right on top.
Hi there, your comment is interesting to read, keep up your engagement, you are awesome
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Thank you!
That’s a fair assessment… As for the dialogues between Tina and John—yes, there could have been more, and I could always add them. But some things were spoken through their eyes, and what John understood needed no words.
Nopes! She was completely oblivious.
Still, I don’t dispute your view, you must have had a particular image in mind.
Thanks a lot:)
I went through both versions of your comment! Wait until tomorrow, the same time when I will give you an "answer" to this "5050" comment because I do not want to give hints to would be contestants at this stage.