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RE: Two-Timing Fiction Story: IL CONTO TOCCA AI PESCI LESSI [Italian version]
Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing
Dear @davidesimoncini, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4/5 | - |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | - |
| Presentation | 1/1 | - |
| My observation | 0.5/1 | - |
| Total | 8.5/10 |
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It could be a great submission if there wasn't a prompt in place in the contest post.
I am not sure why you decided to write two chapters which was not demand of the prompt and that surpassed the word limit x2
Unfortunately, I didn't understand your interpretation of "prompt". In fact, I even tried to ask you, if you remember. But your answer wasn't clarifying: you defined it as a suggestion on which to develop the story, and this confused me even more. The use of the word prompt, especially in recent years and for me, a non-native speaker, has come to mean a rough element to be developed, rather than a stand-alone premise. In narrative terms, what you call a prompt in your posts is actually a prologue: defining it that way would have made everything much clearer, and I would have simply continued.
Regarding the word limit, I should be complaint: as per the rules, the prompt doesn't count.
I'm sorry I worked so hard for nothing. 😓 Anyway, thank you.
I really enjoyed your story.
Even if the prompt wasn’t fully understood, you’ve managed to create something original and meaningful - a piece that stands strong on its own