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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing

in #fiction-s26wk62 days ago

Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing

Dear @adylinah, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Okay
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.4/10

Feedback

  • To be honest a story that goes straight without conversation, twists and turns in fiction gives lesser impact even if it was a great read.

  • You deviated from the main characters but gave more importance to side characters.

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Thank you for the review!