Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing
Dear @entity01, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Okay |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 3/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 1/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | Okay |
| Total | 9.5/10 |
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I don't think there is anything wrong that should alarm co-passengers if they get a card from each other.
I don't think a business card is an invitation for physical relation but it could be a business meeting. However, your story lacked the basic element of discussion or human weakness that comes into play even if John was thinking on 'those' terms and then settled for loyalty.