Greetings Amilcar Sir !
You shared a thrilling story with a great twist. The way the character of Tina is introduced as charming and seemingly perfect for John only to reveal her true intentions as a private detective is expertly woven. The story raises questions about trust, relationships and the blurred lines between reality and expectations in marriage. The suspicions of John about his wife and his own actions add another layer of complexity. The dialogue between John and Tina is engaging. Their interactions are well paced. Overall it is a captivating narrative that keeps readers curious about what happens next. I wish you success. Have a good day!