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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing
Dear @drhira, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.75/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.9/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.95/1 | I enjoyed the twist you added. |
| Total | 9.5/10 |
Feedback
- Overall, you did well to stay faithful to the setup and create suspense, but the story would be stronger if you deepened John's emotions, and made the conversations more realistic.
Thank you so much for reviewing and feedback.