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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w6: Two-timing
Dear @sana-akhtar, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.4/5 | Satisfactory |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.95/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.85/1 | Tina's character felt underdeveloped. I didn't get a clear sense of why she gave John the card. |
| Total | 9/10 |
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- Honestly, the conflict felt a bit too straightforward. John's dilemma was predictable, and I already knew where it was heading from the moment you emphasized his loyalty to his wife. There wasn't much suspense. But still, it was a nice effort!
@waqarahmadshah thank you for considering my post.