Dear @akmalshakir, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.6/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.85/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.85/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.8/1 | I felt you skipped over the bus journey. |
| Total | 9.1/10 |
Feedback
- You shifted the story's focus to the art gallery meeting, which created an interesting twist, but it also pulled the story away from the "Canberra arrival moment" that was supposed to be the central decision point.