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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing
Dear @sbamsoneu, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.65/5 | Good |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.85/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | You leaned too much on familiar and predictable dialogues. |
| Total | 9.3/10 |
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- You delivered a complete story, and I can see the effort in tying temptation versus loyalty into John' s choices but you made the safe choice by ending with John rejecting temptation, but then you weakened your own resolution with the "what if" line. That left the moral lesson unclear.