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RE: Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-Timing
Dear @sohag10, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.
| Criteria | Marks | Remarks |
|---|---|---|
| Story start to finish | 4.4/5 | Satisfactory |
| Originality & Uniqueness | 2.8/3 | Good |
| Presentation | 0.9/1 | Good |
| My observation | 0.9/1 | You often summarized events instead of showing actual conversations. |
| Total | 9/10 |
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- I could see the lesson you wanted to highlight, and that gave your story a meaningful touch. At the same time, you diverged from the original Sydney–Canberra background and summarized too much instead of showing through conversations, which made the story feel rushed.