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RE: The Next Level - [Fictioneers Contest Prompt - Man vs Society]
Geez @negativer, you've blown me away again! I was filled with dread in the first paragraph. You sir are an amazing writer. Excellent job developing emotions in the reader with just enough building of the setting and characters.
This is pretty disturbing... but i can't resist wanting to know more.
Opening lines are so important, so I'm glad it sucked you in long enough to grab you. I definitely had a vision in my head as to the entire world of the story, so I may revisit this little world in the future. Thanks!