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RE: Eyewitness - Flash Fiction

in #fiction6 years ago

Nice short story. Interesting plot. I don't know if there are really exist such extraordinary people but who knows there might be. Our association of good things to light and bad things to darkness has been a part of our ever-changing world and many different cultures.

I am saddened on how they find the testimony of the old lady ridiculous but I can't blame the policemen as well. Some just fail to critically analyze some situation because they choose to look at it very superficially. In my opinion, if they only put the fantasy note aside, maybe they can get something from the statement. They can get some clue on who to look after. At least it will not be futile for inviting the old lady at the station.

Thanks for the share @gibic. It is worth reading.

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Thanks for your thoughtful comment. Yeah, that actually the basis premise when I'm writing this. I'm coming from a place where superstition things still hold a strong belief, many things irrational tolerable, so many discussions lost substances because we're busy talking about the superficial. :)