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What did you like most in my story? Do you think anything can be improved? I think your comments can get better if you put more thoughts into them (not saying this comment is bad.)

Okay no offense taken
I'll try to be constructive from now on

Yup, glad you replied. My goal is to make you better, not to criticize you.

Yep and and am all eyes
To accept any corrections and and suggestions