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RE: The Next Level - [Fictioneers Contest Prompt - Man vs Society]
Hell's teeth Neg, this is brutal. It's left me feeling bruised and unclean.
As such, it did it's job beautifully.
Superbly crafted. I'd wish you luck in the competition but you don't need it...
Thank you for reading! It's amazing how emotionally 'dirty' a story can make you feel even when everything is subtle and you don't go over the top in details. It kinds of makes the reader fill in the gaps, and I think it almost makes them feel 'guilty' for arriving at the conclusion they do.