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RE: The Next Level - [Fictioneers Contest Prompt - Man vs Society]
You are a horrible horrible man.
Not you @negativer--that [redacted] who sprung from your mind! Awesomely awful story.
You are a horrible horrible man.
Not you @negativer--that [redacted] who sprung from your mind! Awesomely awful story.
Awesomely awful is right.
Wickedly good writing.
Ouch.
A happy ending would have robbed the story of its impact.
Still - ouch! Bravo - applause - ouch