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RE: The 3-rd Of Rager - A Steemfiction Promo Story - Part II
Thank you for your awesomely encouraging feedback! I wanted a faster pace initially but things spread out a bit...
Thank you for your awesomely encouraging feedback! I wanted a faster pace initially but things spread out a bit...
You're very welcome, @manoldonchev! I can see why you'd want a fast pace for all the action, but I think if it were any faster, you'd lose all those lovely little details (like, "Much like the forces of nature but concentrated in a couple of hundred pounds of metal blades and all the joints needed to freely swing them around. ") that pull you into the scene. IMHO, of course. 😊