Mate, I had to read this through twice. Your tensing threw me out and I feel that you used the word 'had' too much on your second page. ;)
Mate, I had to read this through twice. Your tensing threw me out and I feel that you used the word 'had' too much on your second page. ;)
I really need to proofread better :/ I actually took out a few intended errors because it was laid on too thick.