Wordsmiths Fiction Week 1: The Disappeared Leader : Steemit Challenge Season 24

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Hello my dear steemian friends.

Today I am very happy to take part in wordsmiths fiction week 1: steemit challenge season 24

This was your story

During a storm, a small cargo ship with 10 people got stranded in the middle of the ocean. They had an idea of ​​the area but they were not sure where they were at that time because all their instruments had stopped working. Then they saw a small island and somehow reached there and anchored.

Their radio was also not working. The ship was badly damaged. And then one morning the team members noticed that their leader was not on the ship and one of their boats was missing.

They looked for him on the island but he was nowhere to be found, so the second in command ordered a rescue team for him.

The rescue team looked for him in the surrounding areas but he was nowhere to be found. It was very surprising that the leader of the ship disappeared without any information.

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Now my story begins from here-

Actually, in the hope of getting some help, the leader of the ship left with his boat at night without telling his companions and while wandering, his boat collided with a rock near another island and the team leader went into deep unconsciousness. In the morning, the people of that island found him very injured and unconscious. Among them was a very knowledgeable doctor who was an expert in many indigenous medicines. He used to make herbal medicines by taking leaves from many types of trees and plants and he had a cure for almost every disease.

That doctor did not know who this person was but as a matter of humanity, with the help of his companions, he took him out of the water and brought him to his hut and then applied some medicines made by him on his wounds.

And tried very hard to bring him back to consciousness. After about 2 months of efforts, that doctor was successful in bringing that leader back to consciousness. The name of the leader of that ship was Rodrigues. After Rodrigues regained consciousness, the doctor asked him, what is your name. Who are you, where did you come from and how did you get swept away in the water like this. But Rodrigues was not able to remember anything. While floating in the water, his head hit a rock due to which he forgot his memory. Rodrigues tried very hard to remember who he was by putting pressure on his brain. But he was still unable to remember anything.

The doctor asked him several times to remember something by putting pressure on his brain and tell his name but he was unable to remember anything. Now the doctor understood that he had forgotten his memory and he could not remember anything. The doctor said to Rodrigues, I think you have forgotten your memory but you don't worry, I am a herbal doctor, trust me I will try to cure you soon.

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And the doctor starts treating him with his herbal medicines. Now Rodrigues starts living with the doctor on his island. And he helps the doctor in his work. The doctor treats him with full dedication and takes great care of him.

It has been about 5 months since he has been with the doctor. One day when he went with the doctor to collect some herbs from the forests on the seashore, suddenly there was a strong storm and rain. Seeing the storm and rain, Rodrigues remembered the terrible night in which he got separated from his team. He screams loudly and faints.

The doctor tries to bring him back to consciousness. After regaining consciousness, Rodrigues tells the doctor everything about how he reached their island. Slowly he starts remembering everything and he tells the doctor everything about himself. He tells how 10 people were stranded in the middle of the sea in a small cargo ship. They had an idea of ​​the area but they were not sure where they were because all their equipment had stopped working. Then he saw a small island and somehow reached there and anchored and saved his team. His radio was also not working. The ship was badly damaged and he was going alone in a small boat in the dark of the night to help his comrades and towards their island when he met with an accident.

After staying there for a few more days, Rodrigues recovered completely and he took out his satellite phone from his broken boat which luckily was working now. He sent a message to his company and sent his location. On hearing the news of him being alive, the people of the company went crazy with happiness and a motor boat was sent to bring him back.

Now he came back. All his comrades and all his family members were very happy to see him back. He was a very honest and hardworking person and his company celebrated a big celebration after getting him back.

Now I inviting my friends to take part in this steemit challenge season 24. @crismenia @jyoti-thelight @mvchacin @suryati1

Thanks for reading my post

@dipi2024

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Hello @dipi2024, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

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Story Setting & Word-Building: That sounds like a wonderful story and I would consider the lost captain lucky that he fell in good hands and recovered even after such a long time2/3
Theme & Message: I was eager to read from you what happened to his team mates or how did they spent their time or even if they managed to reach back?1/2
Formatting & Presentation: You have presented a vivid scenario of the captain how he came back home and the jubilation by the shipping company1.5/2
Originality & Uniqueness:2/3
Total6.5/10

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Thank you very much for your kind words and nice review 🙏

Its really wow how you made the forest storm a memory trigger!

Seeing the storm and rain, Rodrigues remembered the terrible night…”—felt like his braiin got hit by WiFi signals from the past!😊

@artist1111 Thank for visiting and your kind words 😊