Wordsmiths Fiction Week 1: The Disappeared Leader

in #fiction-s24wk12 months ago

ٱلسَّلَامُ عَلَيْكُمْ وَرَحْمَةُ ٱللَّٰهِ وَبَرَكَاتُهُ


Hello Everyone I Am @MEMAMUN 👳‍♀️ From #Bangladesh 🇧🇩

Dear friends, I hope everyone is well, I am also well by the grace of Alhamdulillah. Seeing we got the first week of season 24, it was presented as a story in the first week contest, part of which I am trying to present from my mind setup. Thank you to the four main people of this contest, through whom we have given us such an opportunity. So let's start without delay.

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Main Characters:-
  • Asif - the ship's sailor
  • Mehmed - Assistant
  • Hassan - Cargo Helper
  • Mahdi - Cargo helper

The main plot of the story:-


A small ship with 10 members set sail, and when the ship reached the middle of the sea, a severe storm started, in that storm the chief captain Asif lost the direction of the destination, he wanted to take help on the radio for help, but it was not working, so to save his life, Asif decided to drop anchor on an island nearby if found, They saw an island nearby and anchored in Shekhan, in the morning the rest of the ship found their chief captain missing, and at the same time a small boat was also missing, so the rest of the members became very worried, because they could not go back without the captain, so Assistant Captain Mehmed asked the rest of the members to arrange for Captain Asif's whereabouts, And he will take care of the ship's cargo.

The rest of the members went out to find the chief captain as the Assistant Captain said, they went some distance and guessed that the captain had gone somewhere with the boat from this path and there they found the captain's handkerchief, at the same time they saw blood with the handkerchief, and the rest of the members realized that the captain had left them and left the boat, The members were not sure whether the captain would return to them at all, or whether the captain was in any danger, because the captain was badly wounded, the members were very worried because they did not have any extra boats, just then they saw another ship damaged in the storm in front of them, they brought the ship to shore with great difficulty,

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They realized that the ship had been caught in the storm long ago and some things were still intact, they started searching the ship, then they saw a dead man's skeleton in the ship, and he saw a small box in the hands of the dead man and a note in that box, but the members did not understand the writing of the note, so then Hasan and Mahdi thought that they would discuss the matter with the Assistant Captain, Mahdi and Hassan went to Mehmad with the note, Mehmed saw the letter and realized that the merchants of that ship came from another country, the letter was written that there are terrible monsters in this sea, this is not an ordinary storm, those who are caught in this storm can never get out of this sea. Mehmed was very worried when he saw the writing of this letter, but he did not tell the rest of the members about it, but assured the rest of the members that the chief captain might have taken a boat to another island to arrange help for them, the other members were a little reassured, but Mehmed was a little apprehensive.

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Whether the chief captain is alive at all, if the text of this letter is true, it will be very difficult for them to get out of this sea and they should not leave the chief captain. So Mehmed decided to wait for the chief captain as long as the ship had food, and to look for him. In this way they passed about 16 days, and their food was almost running out, then the Mahdi decided to leave with the rest of the members, because if everyone was stuck here it would be more problematic, and all their families were worried about them, so they repaired the ship and started leaving for their destination again, And when they had gone to the middle of the sea, they were again caught in the storm, but this time no one lost courage, they began to face the storm, the condition of their ship began to deteriorate in a severe storm, the ship began to leak and water began to enter from it, then Mehmed told everyone about that letterback

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The rest of the members were very angry after hearing the letter from Mehmed, but after everything they had nothing else to do, Mehmed asked everyone to get ready with life jackets, but there was no life jacket left for Mehmed, Mehmed was preparing for death and asked Mahdi for the last time to convey the news of his death to his family, just then the storm started to stop Mahdi saw a big ship coming in the distance and showed the red flag to the ship Giving the signal , when the ship came in front of them they were surprised , because Asif was in that ship, he did not betray them , but returned risking his life to save their lives, although he was a little late, because the captain himself was caught in a strong storm on the way to take the boat and was swept away by the current of the sea and reached another island. There he was taken by a fisherman and there the captain went into a coma for about 14 days, when he regained consciousness he returned to the island with the ship and took his colleagues back

Massage: The chief captain risked his life to save his colleagues as well as the assistant captain, teamwork is important.

I will invite some of my friends to participate in this great competition. Those who will read this great story of mine and they will try to participate here. My friends are @ulfatulrahmah @max-pro @suboohi and @wilmer1988


You Everyone For My Post Reading


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Hello @memamun, thank you so much for taking part in Week of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

CriteriaMarks
Story Setting & Word-Building You have done a good job with your imagination running in right direction. However, you have missed two points that would make your story even better.2/3
Theme & Message1.3/2
Formatting & Presentation1.5/2
Originality & Uniqueness2/3
Total6.8/10

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You have posted too many images and missed a crucial point that would help you score better. We are hoping to see you next week again. I wish you the best for this contest!

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Me resultó muy interesante lo del otro barco accidentado en medio del océano con la carta que decía que esas tormentas no eran naturales, sino una especie de maldición del mar. Por otro lado, el capiotán demostró que era un verdadero líder, capaz de arriesgar su vida por la de su tripulación.

Me encantó leerte. Suerte.