Wordsmiths Fiction Week 3: Season 24 – The Last Photo"

Hello my fellow steemians, i come to guys with an awesome creative story, i am not that good in story telling but i have done my best on this one.

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The crew saw a shadowly figure with a glowing eyes looming over the camera, the figure was tall with elongated limbs and no discernable face.but yet the crew found no traces of nadeesha.
So they want to stop the search warrant cause it was becoming dark and promise to comeback the next day to continue. Nadeesha parent were crying and calling her name through out the search. So when the return to the village the crew went back to their different destination, but when nadeesha parents went home ,they weren't able to sleep they were so worried of their daughter condition, whether she is dead or alive.
Meanwhile,at the other hand nadeesha was saved from this monster by local hunter who went to hunt for meat that same morning, when she got missing.she told the hunter after getting back from her unconsciousness everything and who she is, where she lived .
This is what she told him.....
When i got to the hidden lake , i was seeing mysterious creatures that made me scared and i fainted and that was the last thing i remembered.

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Meanwhile, in the morning nadeesha parents and the crew went back into the forest to look for her and still no traces of her, then the parents were disappointed and started blaming her brother for not telling them when she was living to the hidden lake .
At the other hand, nadeesha and hunter where going to nadeesha village to go and return her to her parents,when she entered the village everyone where very happy including the king,so they king asked his guards to go and call nadeesha parents and the crew that their missing daughter is back.
When the guard got to the hidden lake, they told the crew and her parents that she is back , the parents were very happy and return to the village to go and see her.

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When they saw her , they hugged her and thanked the hunter for saving their daughter's life.

I'm inviting @ninapenda @fortwis09 @bella90

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Hello @saviour-moses, thank you so much for taking part in Week-3 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

CriteriaMarks
Story Setting & Word-Building: I appreciate your willingness to enter into a contest and post your version of the story. However, your story doesn't have enough words1.25/3
Theme & Message: Your theme has not much to answer the prompt in the contest post1/2
Formatting & Presentation: You have used the contest's image which is against the rule0.5/2
Originality & Uniqueness: I guess you have missed on too many points.1.25/3
Total4/10

Feedback
Please read the rules of the contest when you submit your story next week, all the best!
Low word count, use of contest post image which is not allowed.

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