Wordsmith Fiction Week 5: Season 24 : "The Mysterious Passenger"
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Hello friends and welcome to my article in the SLC S24/W5 I would love to appreciate @dove11 and team for creative topic to this regard. I would be dropping mine now.
The sound of the airport chimes, the regular announcement and ideal conveying of boarding and waiting passengers rented the air. They queued up in their respective lines to get checked their luggage and passports. There was a special dude in the mix too. He looked so good and audacious to everyone's amazement.
He was being attended to by Miss Shanel, it got to his turn, his passports was beautifully arrayed with different stamps showing how much he has been to different countries. Her face turned to a grin almost instantly. "Zuriel? Does that even exist." She muttered almost out loud. She looked at him beyond her glasses at amazement. Where are you from? She asked with brows raised in curiousity.
Moreso, Zuriel the young man as his name was at the time being answered very composed. "Zuriel a country at the yonder, at the fading latitude of our ancient map readings." He sounded in parables. She immediately ran background checks again on her system clicking keys more intensely and faster. She shakes her head and asked him to wait a bit. He got into the supervisors chamber. Mr Brown, the supervisor was intrigued too and asked Zuriel in for questioning.
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Zuriel explained convincingly how his country located at an almost extinct latitude of the ancient world map had been faced with lack of civilization. Basically a third world country. He insisted that coming to Canada was one of their yearning to embrace civilization, viewing tourist places and striking bilateral agreement between the countries to foster economic and financial development as regarding their growth and enhancement of the country.
However, after pitching such impressive comments, the supervisor Mr. Brown could not agree less, nodding in satisfaction because he had concrete evidence showing how crude the country Zuriel had been, so small and requiring development. He opened his briefcase bringing out old archeological artefacts found in their country showing how much is yet to be exploited, indeed a great place for Canada to partner and bring out the best from.
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In view of this, his passport was stamped and the supervisor contacted the special adviser to the minister of tourism and regional planning to contact the required agencies immediately. Reservations were made immediately for Zuriel for a duration of 2 months where we would be taught alot about civilization and how well to impact his nation.
Conclusively, he was scheduled to travel with a team of archeologist and experts engineers to start up civilization. The bilateral agreement were signed. Zuriel really existed and during the exploitation a gold dome was found untapped! At the valley of Zuriel was acres of land likened to be a swamp, on close observation crude oil was spotted! Zuriel indeed was the saviour of Zuriel!
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A good job, we are looking forward to join us in the final week! All the best for the contest.
Warm regards sir, I appreciate your feedback on my article, I would definitely be here for the final week of the contest. I would put in more efforts to be more creative and effective with my big idea too.