"Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: Season 24: The Mysterious Passenger "
Hello friends I hope you are great today I am here to take part in another interesting challenge that is"Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: Season 24: The Mysterious Passenger "
The lady officer Sana was very curious how it could be happened his country is not on map nor his documents were fake what could be the reason the passenger seems very contented and calm which was more offensive for Sana.
Could you please tell me when your country was originated actually.....he told yup it's existing before 25 BC and it had very old civilization it might be the reason it's not existing on map.
Sana further asks may I knew what are your intentions to visit Pakistan and especially the Sindh the Mohenjo-daro I loved it madam Sana do you know it's World earliest civilization what had mark of Egypt too.
Sana was listening him with more curiosity why it has source of attraction for you although I am Pakistani I never visited this place till now.
The passenger told yeah this is the difference I am on World travel as you have seen stamps on my passport and I had keen interest in exploration of World old civilization and Pakistan is on the top amongst them.
This is the reason I was waiting when I arrived in Sindh and visit this beautiful place which had my inspiration is the civilization had certain features which are highly remarkable.
The Sana and other officers complete the inquisition from all aspects and his previous travel history shows that he was right he came to visit World ancient civilization in Mohenjo-daro, they all him as his mission was not harmful for others.
He wanted to explore the hidden facts of old civilization as he also belonged from the place which was extinct from the World, he seems very happy as he was allowed to continue his journey of exploration.
It's all about my today's post.
I would like to invite my friends @m-fdo, @jannat12 and @goodybest to take part in the challenge.
Hello @drhira, thank you so much for taking part in Week 5 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.
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The story is creative. Setting and world-building are good. The theme is clear and in line with the contest theme. You could have scored more if you described the setting of the airport, the feelings of the officer, and the country the passenger came from. Overall, a very good attempt.