Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: The Mysterious Passenger | Steemit Challenge Season 24

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Assalam-o-Alaikum!

How are you friends ? Hope you will be healthy happy and well . I am also fit and healthy.Today i want to take participate in contest Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: The Mysterious Passenger | Steemit Challenge Season 24 by @dove11.


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It was 2:15 PM when the Flight 716 made arrived at Jinnah International Airport Karachi. Regardless of their tiredness the majority of the travelers stayed calm and waited in line at the immigration desks. They having passports and registration cards in their hands. One of them was a tall man with a soft smile and peaceful look. Like everyone else he stood in line with a passport that was the same shade of deep blue.


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Officer Zoya gave him a standard smile as he arrived at the immigration counter. After examining his photo and comparing it to his face she opened his passport and turned to the identification page. She froze her fingers. She bent over. "Taured" was the name of a nation she had never heard of in her life displayed in strong readable characters. Zoya blinked wondering if she was reading incorrectly or was simply exhausted. However it said "Taured" quite plainly. There was nothing like this in all the countries she had committed to memory on the globe map. The passport was authentic though. Japan France and even Dubai had their entry and exit stamps on it. Everything appeared genuine. She called her superior officer right away.

Speaking English fluently the man seemed at ease. He merely responded "Taured is in Europe between France and Spain " when asked about his nation. Officials gazed at one another. Such a nation did not exist there. "Sir we're sorry but there is no Taured here " they said presenting him with a map. He appeared perplexed. Softly he remarked "But it's been there for more than a thousand years." "Three years ago I too took a trip here. You are able to review your records.


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No such name or prior record of his arrival was found by the officials when they searched their systems. The format was correct his passport contained a valid visa and the airport security cameras captured him getting off the plane like everyone else. The man grinned once more and responded "I am a business consultant " when they inquired about the purpose of his visit. I've traveled to Karachi to attend a meeting. My business handles cross-border logistics. He even had paperwork including a return ticket for the next week meeting letters and hotel reservations. Except for the nation he was from all of the paperwork appeared authentic.

The issue was increasingly perplexing. Do they need to take him into custody? Deport him? However how is it possible to deport someone whose nation does not exist? While higher officials were informed the cops made the decision to place him in a secure area for the night. Officer Zoya sat contemplating that night. In her career she had never witnessed anything like this. The man appeared harmless intelligent and nice. However his story was nonsensical. Could he have been extraterrestrial? An alternate reality? We humans are unaware of a concealed reality?


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What if he got in through a temporal or spatial opening? What if the boundary between his world and ours briefly opened today for some reason? When they got to his room the following morning he was gone. There was no escape route the windows were intact and the door was locked from the inside. Everything was gone including his clothes bag and documents. He was gone in an instant. Airport cameras did not reveal any evidence either.

No one is aware of that man's true identity or origins to this day. A few people think it was a dream. He was a time traveler according to some. However Zoya thinks he came for a reason either to learn more about our planet or to locate something that has been lost. She adds she would like to sit down and hear his story if he ever returns not to judge or catch him but just to understand. Because the truth can occasionally be stranger than fiction.


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Thank you


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Bundles of thanks to you for taking the time to read my post and I sincerely hope that my creative insights will be enjoyed by everyone here.

ACHIEVEMENT 1 LINK

https://steemit.com/hive-172186/@neelofar/achievement1-my-introduction-to-steemit

WRITER:

@neelofar from Pakistan


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Hello @, thank you so much for taking part in Week-5 of the Steemit Challenge - Season 24! We truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on our evaluation criteria, is provided below.

CriteriaMarks
Story Setting & Word-Building: Your story building is on our expected lines2.75/3
Theme & Message: You have selected a familiar theme and your message is clear1.75/2
Formatting & Presentation: Your presentation is okay but you have used one extra image1.75/2
Originality & Uniqueness: Again your story is on expected lines which left me wondering or maybe expecting a little more.2.75/3
Total9/10

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Moderated by: @dove11

Guao! Has escrito un excelente relato que nos deja con dudas sobre la existencia de este viajero, que llegó de un país desconocido y logró desaparecer de una prisión de la que era difícil escapar. ¿Será que todo esto era parte de un plan para que el viajero luego fuera liberado por un trabajador del aeropuerto y así comenzar a tejer una historia de misterio y suspenso? ¿Qué me dices?