Wordsmiths Fiction Week 5: Season 24: The Mysterious Passenger
They say nothing surprises immigration officers anymore—until someone walks in from a country that doesn’t exist.

It was just past 9:00 AM at Terminal D of the Murtala Muhammed International Airport. Officer Amaka James had already cleared over two dozen travelers that morning—mostly tourists, business people, and a few returning students. Her mind was set to autopilot, her smile polite but distant, her questions rehearsed.
Then he stepped forward.
A tall, unassuming man in a charcoal coat, holding a worn black suitcase and a navy-blue passport with gold trim. The passport looked official—stamped, dated, and sealed. His eyes held an unusual calm, the kind that usually belongs to people with nothing to prove and nothing to hide.
“Good morning,” he said.
Amaka reached for the passport.
“Purpose of visit?” she asked, not yet looking up.
“To observe,” he replied simply.
That made her glance at him. Observe?
She opened the passport.
And froze.
The country of origin read: Elysiar.
She blinked. Looked again. The name wasn’t just unfamiliar—it was non-existent. She knew that because she had once won an award for top scorer in her global studies course. She’d memorized every single country on the world map.
This one? Didn’t exist.
She tried to remain calm. “Elysiar?” she asked, her tone careful.
“Yes,” he said.
She flipped through the pages. U.S. visa. Stamped. Brazil. France. Kenya. All authentic. Dated and signed by real officers at real airports.
Her fingers shook slightly.
“Please hold on,” she said and signaled for assistance.
Within minutes, two senior officers and a digital forensics expert surrounded the desk. They ran checks. Scanned the passport. Verified the stamps. Every single one was authentic.
Except for the origin.
“How is this possible?” one of the senior officers whispered.
The man remained silent. Calm.
Finally, someone asked him directly.
“Sir, can you explain where you're from?”
The man looked around, as though weighing if the truth was worth telling. Then he spoke.
“I come from a place beyond your maps,” he began. “Elysiar exists—not in your dimension, but parallel to it. We live like you. We eat, sleep, build families, dream of better futures. But unlike your world, ours is... fading. Time moves differently there. Our sun is dying, our oceans have turned silver. We’ve sent out ten envoys to find a compatible world.”
He paused, eyes locking with Officer Amaka’s.
“I am the last envoy.”
The room went silent.
“Your Earth is rich. Overflowing with soul, chaos, beauty. Our scientists believe it can restore what’s left of Elysiar—if we can learn how your people live, love, and rebuild after pain.”

The senior officers exchanged skeptical glances. It sounded like a well-crafted story from a science fiction film. And yet, nothing about the man felt untruthful. His voice carried a tone that didn’t beg to be believed—it simply was.
They debated, behind closed doors, whether to detain him or deport him. But the truth was, they couldn’t. There was no country to return him to.
Legally, the passport was impossible to invalidate—every seal checked out.
Amaka made the final call.
She led him to the waiting area, sat beside him, and asked one more question.
“Why now? Why come here, to Nigeria?”
He smiled softly. “Because despite everything, your country still dances. Even in the midst of pain, you sing. Where I’m from, people have forgotten joy. I needed to feel it again.”
He pulled a thin notebook from his coat. Inside were sketches of women at markets, children playing in red dust, choir singers, masquerade dancers.
“I’ve been watching for some time. I just needed permission to stay.”
Amaka stared at the pages. Her heart softened.
In all her years on the job, she had seen many faces—eager tourists, desperate asylum seekers, and confident businessmen. But none had moved her like this man who claimed to be from nowhere.
She reached into her drawer and pulled out a visitor’s permit form.
“You’ll be granted temporary stay under humanitarian observation,” she said.
He looked at her, eyes warm. “Thank you.”
“And while you’re here,” she added, “maybe teach us a little about your world too.”
Weeks passed.
The man became a quiet fixture in the community. He volunteered at local schools, helped rebuild a collapsed classroom, and was often found sketching life around him—quietly, attentively.
People didn’t ask many questions. They only knew that when he entered a space, peace seemed to follow.
Officer Amaka visited him once more before his temporary stay expired.
He handed her a small box. Inside, a map—drawn in shimmering ink—of a place called Elysiar. In the corner, written in neat cursive: “Thank you for letting me feel life again.”
She never saw him again after that.
No forwarding address. No notice of departure. Only the map.
Some say he was never real.
Others believe he came from a lost tribe or hidden region.
But Amaka knew. In her heart, she knew.
He came from a world that no longer existed.
And for a brief moment, he reminded hers how precious this one truly is.
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I will like to invite @ruthjoe, @mophebe and @bossj23 to join the challenge.
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The story setting and world-building are excellent. Elysiar feels real and magical. The message is very emotional, and the words flowed clearly. Good attempt. Keep writing.
Thank you so much.
My pleasure.
Me conmovió leer este texto. Yo que vivo en Venezuela, pero estando acá en Steemit he aprendido de su cultura, también podría decir lo mismo del viajero de Elysiar; ustedes tiene un encanto, una magia y una sonrisa que gritan a voces que: A pesar de todo lo malo, siempre hay motivos para estar alegres.
Me encantó tu texto. Te deseo suerte.
Awwn, thank you so much.
Are you on discord? My discord ID is on my profile.
Yes i am, i will reach out.
Thanks