"Steemit Challenge s26wk1 : The Office Project"


Assalamu Alaikum


How are you? By Allah's grace, I'm doing very well. This week, I created this story according to the organizer's suggestion and this week's theme and I hope you like it. In this story, I unraveled a mystery and discussed the efforts of a company that is researching to create a cheap cancer drug because if they ever find it, they will be on top of the world.

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Stormy night. Strong wind is banging on the window pane, the clock has stopped at 2 am.

The lights in the lab are flickering—in the middle stands a huge, terrifyingly beautiful machine—BioSynth-300X.

This technology, designed to treat cancer by reprogramming human cells, was supposed to change history one day, but today… a terrifying truth is hidden inside this machine.

Bokhtiar's voice trembles,
— “Yousha, do you understand that what Samin is doing… does not match our project at all?”

Yousha is looking at the monitor. By hacking into the machine's code, he discovered the H-47 Compound—a chemical that enters the human brain and doubles anger, jealousy, and uncontrolled aggression.

First discovery – the crack in the mask

Samin—from the outside, calm, modest, beloved by everyone, and the lab’s lead scientist, but there was no way to deny that he was behind this code.

Yousha’s eyes widened,
— “This is not a cancer drug…”

Bokhtiar put his hand on his shoulder, lowered his voice,
— “This thing will destroy the city. Why is Samin doing this?”

Unveiling the mask

The next day. The heavy door of the lab was closed, only three people inside.

Bokhtiar shouted,
— “Samin, what are you really making?”

A sneer on Samin’s lips,
— “You don’t know how much this drug costs in the underworld! Controlling people’s emotions means controlling the entire city.”

Yousha slammed his fist on the table,
— “We are doctors—not criminals! We came to cure cancer, not to shed blood.”

Plan and Counterattack

Yousha and Bokhtiar decided that they would save this project from Samin. They hacked the biosynth-300x, erased Samin's code and restored the original formula, but Samin counterattacked—he locked the company's entire database.

Then they brought in two new fighters—
Abid : AI medical solutions specialist.
Roni : nano-technology wizard.

From mystery to victory

The four-man fight began.

72 hours of sleepless work.

Roni installed a nano-chip in the BioSynth-300X and broke Samin's lock.

Abid used AI to analyze each drug formula and fix the mistakes.

In the end, they created a drug that was 92% effective in the early stages of cancer, and cost only $2 per bottle.

Dramatic final scene

During the project demo, the company's CEO said in a trembling voice,
— “This will be the world's cheapest and most effective cancer drug!”

The entire hall erupted in applause.

The police arrived and arrested Samin. The mocking smile on his face disappeared forever.

The end

Bokhtiar said slowly,
— “We didn't just finish a project… We fulfilled the dream of saving millions of lives.”

The life gene engineering company became a global sensation.

The names of four scientists were written in gold letters in history—
They proved that science is not just technology… It is humanity's greatest weapon.

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I invited three of my friends to join

@yousha4
@samin1
@abeed01

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-1: The Office Project

Dear @bokhtiar1444, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.5/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.75/3Good
Presentation0.75/1Good
My observation0.75/1The "thrilling quest" element is missing; instead of a journey full of uncertainty, it becomes a rapid task list.
Total8.75/10

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  • You opened with greetings and contest info instead of diving straight into the action, which the contest organizer specifically asked to avoid.

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