Steemit Challenge s26wk2- Mysterious Roommate

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Hello My Steemain Friends ,

Today I am writing about an interesting Steemit Engagement Challenge S26- W2: which is all time my favourite topic Mysterious Roommate. this amazing challenge organised by @dove11 .

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As Timothy had seen Ronnie taking out tools from the black bag, it was natural for him to be scared and surprised. Somehow he started fearing Ronnie but he also wanted to know the truth about him. Now Timothy started keeping an eye on every activity of Ronnie.

Timothy saw that a person comes to meet Ronnie who is in black clothes, wearing black glasses and a big hat, due to which Timothy is not able to see his face. He sees that Ronnie is discussing a map with that person. Now his suspicion deepens because the way he lived and he was not a businessman, he is afraid that there is some threat to his life from Ronnie. He often tries to find out through conversations but Ronnie smiles and avoids the matter.

One day Timothy gets a big truth about Ronnie. He finds his ID card. In which it is revealed that Ronnie is an officer of the intelligence department. Timothy thinks why Ronnie gave him a wrong introduction and what is the reason for his stay here.

Now he waits for the morning and shows Ronnie his ID card. Ronnie's facial expressions change and Ronnie says, "I know you have many questions in your mind", then Timothy keeps staring at him and says now don't tell me any lies, tell me the truth.

Ronnie says that here in the college the business of selling drugs among the students is flourishing. Due to which the lives of many youth have been ruined.

And this is a very big gang which could not be caught. That is why the intelligence department has given me the responsibility of exposing this gang on this mission. I could find out only by becoming a college student. I came to stay in the hostel where no one would know my identity.

Now we are in the last phase of our mission, I was just about to leave. Well, it is good that you found out. Within just a few minutes that gang is going to be destroyed. It is surrounded from all sides. Timothy is very happy to hear this and says that he is going to execute his secret plan. Timothy tells Ronnie that I also want to support you in this work. Because my younger brother also started taking drugs due to which he died. I am burning in the fire of revenge for the death of my younger brother. I have also come to finish them, but I did not have the power in my hands. When I inquired, I came to know that this is the work of a very big gang. Today, by meeting with you, my dream can be fulfilled.

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Ronnie extended his hand and took Timothy along and left to complete the mission. Timothy gave all the information he had about that gang to Ronnie. Ronnie said that now it has become easier to complete the mission, because the more information we have, the more strongly we will be able to attack them. There was a big battle, Ronnie won. Because everything went according to plan, a very big gang was destroyed, the mission was accomplished. Ronnie was praised everywhere and Timothy also felt relieved because he had avenged his brother's death and he too was talked about everywhere.

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Steemit Challenge S26-w2 : Mysterious Roommate

Dear @aviral123, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3
Presentation0.9/1
My observation0.9/1
Total9.4/10

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  • It was great theme but ended too abruptly. It was great theme but ended too abruptly. A little touch of fiction would have made it a great story. But overall it was a nice idea.
    *Ronnie said, the gang was about to be busted within minutes as it was already surrounded by all sides so what role Timothy played in the end or how was his intel utilized?

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Hey @aviral123
I like your post in which everything perfect I really appreciate you to write this type of story. Best of luck . God bless you with happiness. I also participate in this contest u visit my post and see u really enjoy it.

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