Second chance romance.

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Dennis was a happy man, he achieved success in his real life, he worked as a manager in a company, he lived in his own modern house in the city. He had no shortage of cars and houses. He was highly respected as a manager in the office. He worked hard for his success, and finally he was able to reach the threshold of success.

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But even though he achieved financial success, he was very sad in real life because he was lonely. He was living alone and had no one to keep him company. So he was very sad. He could not tell anyone about his pain, he could bear the pain himself and walk on the road, but in public he had to stay calm, act so that other people would not understand.

The memory of that day would always come to his mind and he would suffer as usual. That day, he had hurt his colleague Janice without his knowledge, and whenever he remembered that special day, he would feel sad and his heart would be very sad.

Dennis was sitting in front of a desk in his office that day, checking his phone, suddenly Janine's name flashed in front of him, then suddenly Janine remembered that he had hurt Janine without his knowledge.

Dennis started remembering that day, but what happened that day.....!

That day, Janine entered Dennis's office, then Dennis was working, when Janine entered the room, Dennis stopped his work and sat on his desk. Dennis and Janine were sharing various work-related conversations, when the work talk was over, their personal discussions started, at one point in the discussion, Janine told Dennis that we need to give each other personal time. Then Dennis got angry with Janine and Janine got angry with Dennis.

Both of them were talking angrily at each other, they got into arguments with each other and they got into arguments and debates. Janice tried to explain one thing repeatedly that both of them should be given enough personal time along with work, but Dennis opposed her opinion and said that we work here so we should give priority to work first and then our personal life.

Dennis also said that we are professionals here, so we should pay the most attention to work and give importance to our personal life. Janice was very hurt by this statement of Dennis and she left from there. And while leaving, Dennis said that you have brought tears to my eyes today, you will understand one day and remember me. You will not be able to control your emotions with this professionalism of yours, one day you will definitely understand.

And you will keep regretting and crying about the days that have passed, that day there will be no use crying because you will not get this time that has passed back. Saying this, Janice left her job and never met Dennis again. Dennis was thinking about these words and was suffering. And he asked himself, if I had not been angry that day and had adjusted myself, then Janice would be by my side today.

Dennis thought to himself, I think I have completely lost my real person, I will probably never see him again! Suddenly one day he thought of going to a coffee house and he was looking for Janice in his mind, he went to the coffee house and sat at his table and thought about Janice! He said if Janice were by my side today, then we could have spent today's happy time together.

Suddenly Janice entered the coffee house to have coffee, suddenly he looked at the table next to him and saw Dennis. Then Dennis came and sat at the table next to Janice and was very happy and scared in his heart, because he had once lost her for a long time by hurting her heart, and if he could not meet her today, maybe he would lose her in the course of his life.

Dennis looked at him a little scared, Janice also looked at him, both of them looked at each other in shock for a while. And Dennis tried to talk to him and Janice also started talking to him. At one point, they discussed the days they had spent together and both of them realized a lot of pain. And Dennis said that if I had not been angry that day and accepted it, then we would not have had to spend so much time apart from each other.

They realized their mistakes and discussed their future. And they both wanted to build a beautiful future together. And he started to decide in his mind how to achieve the love of things, because there is a maturity in the first love, and a lot of cracks can be seen in the second love, but if the two can understand each other and adapt in that way, then that love matures. So to maintain this love, you have to respect it, and hold it firmly, and this is called second chance romance.

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-5: Second Chance Romance

Dear @abdulmomin, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation0.85/1Good
My observation0.85/1The story feels repetitive at times.
Total9.2/10

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  • You followed the basic background, but your story felt predictable and missed opportunities for depth. The conflict was too shallow and the dialogue lacked emotions.

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Thank you very much for taking the time to review my post, and I wish you all the best. I will try to participate with more quality posts in the future.