Second chance romance

in #fiction-s26wk517 days ago (edited)

Hello My Steemain Friends ,

I'm writing about a special Steemit Engagement Challenge. It's Season 26, Week 5. The topic is second chance romance. This is a subject I always love. The challenge was organized by @dove11.




Clara looked at the divorce papers. Her hand shook a little. Just six months ago, this idea felt crazy. She and Ethan were the perfect couple. Everyone saw them that way. Their quick romance led to a happy, busy life.

They had big dreams and a strong spark. But things changed. Ethan’s work got demanding. Clara’s art career took off. They stopped being a team. They became like strangers living in the same house.



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The trouble started small. It was a forgotten anniversary. Then a mean comment came from being tired. Weeks of quiet followed. Ethan moved to the extra room. This showed the distance growing between them. It wasn't hate. It was a deep, painful gap. Time and not caring enough had caused it.

One rainy day, Clara packed old photo albums. She found their wedding album. Her fingers touched the happy faces. She saw the young hope in their eyes. The pure joy of that day was clear. Ethan saw her from the door and stopped.


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Ethan saw the album. Then he saw her teary eyes. They said nothing. But they both understood. A quick memory of their strong love flashed. They remembered the promise they made.

That night, they ate cold takeout. They talked. They did not blame anyone. They spoke of how things slowly fell apart. They talked about things they expected but never said. They feared letting each other down. Ethan said he felt unseen. Clara admitted she felt lonely. She felt lost in their own home. It was hard and hurt. But it was true.

No sudden magic fixed things. No big move saved them. Just small, planned steps. They drank coffee together in the mornings. Even if only for ten minutes. Phones were not allowed at dinner. They read old love letters. Their eyes showed warmth and sadness. They walked together, hand-in-hand.

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Just like old times. They found the city again. They also found each other. They learned to talk again. They valued calm moments. They fought for the love they had forgotten.

The divorce papers stayed unsigned. They ended up in a drawer. A clear sign of how much they almost lost. Their second chance was new. It wasn't going back. This love had scars.

But it was stronger. It knew happiness could break. It knew effort was key. It showed the big, quiet power of choosing each other. Every single day. With clear eyes.




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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-5: Second Chance Romance

Dear @brah13, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4/5Satisfactory
Originality & Uniqueness2.5/3Satisfactory
Presentation0.8/1Good
My observation0.5/1Less than 500 words
Total7.8/10

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  • The original prompt centered on Dennis, a corporate manager burdened by hidden loneliness, and his unresolved conflict with Jenny but your story shifted away completely, focusing instead on Clara and Ethan's marriage struggles.

Moderated by: @waqarahmadshah

Hi @waqarahmadshah , @dove11 , There are no character named Dennis and Jenny in my write up, Kindly verify.
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