Second chance romance

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Dennis walk out from office that night with anger still in his eyes. Jenny words was burning like fire inside him. He was proud of his success, proud of his position, but deep inside he knew he hurt her badly. That evening never leave his memory, even when days change into months and months into years.

Now Dennis was top manager. He had a big house in city, shiny car, people respect him everywhere. Society look at him like a successful man. But when he come back home, he feel empty. No one wait for him, no laugh, no warm voice. Just silent walls. He had friends but not the one who truly know his heart. At night he feel loneliness press on his chest like heavy stone. In that silence, Jenny face come back again and again.
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One evening, after a long meeting, Dennis walk into a cafe near his office. He only want black coffee to stop his headache. But when he enter, his eyes stop moving. At corner table, Jenny was sitting, reading a book. For a moment time freeze. She look same, maybe little mature, but her presence was still warm. His heart beat fast. For second he want to leave. But something inside push him forward.
“Jenny” he whisper.
She look up. Surprise come in her eyes, then a small polite smile. “Hello Dennis,” she say, voice calm but a little distant. Dennis sit down without asking. His hands was shaking. “I, I never got a chance to say sorry. That evening I was wrong. My ego, my anger, everything. I should never speak those words.”
Jenny look at him, her eyes still calm. “It was long ago. Life moved on.”
But Dennis hear pain hidden in her tone. He lean forward. “Life moved on, but not for me. I achieve everything, but emptiness never leave me. Without you, all of this feels like nothing. I don’t deserve second chance, but still, I am asking.”

Jenny close her book. For some time she not speak. Café was full of sound, cups clinking, people laughing but for them, world was silent. She remember those days. How much she care for him. How his words cut her like knife. But she also remember his kindness before the fight, how he was always standing with her in small and big troubles.

You hurt me Dennis,” she finally say. “You broke something inside me that day. Do you even know how hard it was for me?”

Dennis nod, his eyes wet. “I know. And that pain never leave me. Everyday I live with it. Please… give me chance to fix it. Let me be the man you needed.”

Jenny look outside the window. Evening sun was falling, sky turning orange. Her heart fight between anger and forgiveness. Silence was heavy. After some time she sigh. “Maybe people do deserve second chances… if they really change.” Hope light up in Dennis eyes. “I change, Jenny. I am not same man anymore. Let me prove to you.”

Jenny give soft smile, real this time. “Alright, Dennis. But no more ego, no more pride. If we try again, we walk together as equal.”
Dennis hold her hand carefully, almost afraid it will slip. “I promise.”
That evening, when they both walk out from café, Dennis feel a lightness in his heart he didn’t know from many years. For first time, he not feel alone. Jenny was beside him, not just a memory now, but a second chance for love, a chance to live again.

On the street, wind blow gentle, like world giving blessing. Jenny still quiet, but her steps was slow and steady near him. Dennis know it will not be easy. Past cannot erase so fast. But now he had hope, and hope was enough to keep him alive.

He look at Jenny, and smile come on his face. For so long he dream of this moment. Tonight, it was real. He promise himself he will never waste this chance again.

Thank You My Friends!

My big thanks to respected @dove11 for organizing this contest. I learned alot from this. I am so happy that I try something new and different in my life.

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-5: Second Chance Romance

Dear @shahidalinaz, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.7/5Good
Originality & Uniqueness2.9/3Good
Presentation0.9/1Good
My observation0.85/1The resolution came faster and easier than expected
Total9.35/10

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  • I really felt the loneliness you showed in Dennis's life. You made it clear that even with success, he was incomplete without Jenny, and that aligned well with the original narrative but the flashback argument was a big part of the prompt, and you skipped over it instead of weaving it into the story.

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Your story beautifully captures the complexity of the humans emotions. The weight of past mistakes and the beauty of forgiveness. You have captured Dennis transformation from pride to humility and the Jenny's journey from pain to forgiveness is really heartwarming. Thanks for sharing a lovely tale of redemption and the power of love. I am sure this story will tug at your heartstrings and leave you believing in second chance. Stay blessed and greetings!

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