Second chance Romance.
Bismillahir Rahmanir Raheem
This is @sohag10 from #Bangladesh.
Dennis is working as an officer in a big company. Although there is a story behind this great success of his. This incident has brought a big change in Dennis's life but it could not bring peace of mind. Although everyone knew him as a happy and easy-going person, no one knew what was on his mind.
While working in that office, he suddenly remembered a different evening in his life. That evening, he said something angry to his dear friend Jenny, who is in this state of their relationship today. Although Dennis thought that he could live without her, he came to real life and wrote that he could not live well without her.
When they had a fight, Jenny kept quiet but Dennis cursed him in an angry state, due to which they have not seen each other for a long time.
Suddenly Dennis felt that he needed to meet Jenny. So he collected all his information to meet her and found out where she was and prepared to meet her at a specific time.
Since they haven't seen each other for many years. When Dennis went to Jenny's office to meet and saw her working attentively, Dennis thought she was happy without me. But he doesn't know what's on Jenny's mind anymore, and everything can't be judged by external appearances.
The main issue of their quarrel was very small. If they had corrected themselves by talking nicely instead of being impatient, they wouldn't have had to stay away from each other for so long. However, Dennis was a little more angry, which is why he regretted the quarrel. He wanted to apologize.
Jenny was surprised to see Dennis. Suddenly she thought to herself what she would say to me or what I would say to her after meeting her after so long. When the two of them were looking at each other with beautiful, available eyes and they kept looking at them. Suddenly Dennis said directly that I regretted what happened that evening.
I thought I could be happy or at peace without you, but in fact, I haven't had a single good day without you. I only miss you. Jenny looked at him but didn't say anything to him.
Dennis said, "I apologize for what happened that evening." Suddenly Jenny said, "If you hadn't talked too much or gotten too angry that day, we wouldn't have had to stay away for so many years."
Dennis said, "I had expressed my interest in meeting you many times before, but I couldn't apologize because of the stubbornness inside me."
Suddenly Jenny said, "I miss you too, but for some reason I couldn't meet you."
Dennis suddenly shouted and let out all the pride and pain that had been accumulating in his heart. The two of them looked at each other for a while.
Jenny kept smiling sweetly at him. Dennis was happy to see him smile like that. In this way, the many years that had been lost from their lives were fulfilled in one evening.
Jenny says we will be good friends from now on. Because of Dennis's beautiful attitude, their good relationship is once again perfected in one evening.
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Steemit Challenge S26-w5 : Second chance romance
Dear @, here is the detailed assessment of your submission:
This story missed the impact when you started with intro which kills the fictional line.
Your story lacked the conversation and melodrama otherwise it was in line.
Thank you so much for reviewing my post so nicely 🤍
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¡Saludos amigo!🤗
Esta historia es el claro recordatorio de que, hablar cuando estamos molestos, es la peor acción que podemos hacer, porque en ese proceso, decimos cosas que no sentimos y, lastima sin querer.
Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica... Un fuerte abrazo💚
Actually, what we need to do is that when there is a fight, one person should remain silent. Thank you for your nice comment ❤️