Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing

in #fiction-s26wk64 days ago

Assalamu Alaikum,
Hello everyone,
I am @afrinn

From #Bangladesh

Hello friends I hope you are great today I am here to take part in the challenge Steemit Challenge S26-w6 : Two-timing.

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John was traveling from Sydney to Canberra by bus. He sat down in his seat and glanced at the seat next to him, which was not yet empty.

At that moment, his phone rang. His wife Sania asked if his journey from Delhi to Sydney was going well. While John was busy answering his phone, he saw that a beautiful girl in her mid-twenties had come and sat next to him.

John hung up the phone and smiled at the girl sitting next to him. As soon as the bus started moving, they started talking. Three hours passed by talking about various things, and they reached Canberra.

John was feeling a strange temptation. He was very worried, and then it happened. When he got off the bus, that girl Tina shook his hand, gave him a card and smiled... John was very worried when he saw her smile. And he kept thinking that there might be something important written or said inside the card. So he was always a little bit more thoughtful about the card. Then they

He decided to talk about something important in a coffee shop. They went to a coffee shop and ate different kinds of food. In this way, their relationship became stronger. And they liked each other. In this way, they both fell in love with each other.

John, on the one hand, was in love with Tina, and on the other hand, he was also secretly in love with his wife Sania. Tina knew nothing about this. She believed that John was only hers. And she always believed that John loved her very much.

On the other hand, Tina was also very clever. Even though she continued to love John, she regularly met the son of a rich businessman, whom she introduced as a "special friend". Her goal was the money and influence of that boy. And she was always very enthusiastic about spending time with John, who loved money.

Meanwhile, Tina and Sania have a deep relationship and friendship since they were very young. But John never knew or understood that. His wife Sania is a good friend. Suddenly, John introduced himself as a friend and took her to his house. But his wife Sania was not at home that day. So John took the opportunity to go home. And introduced her to her parents.

Then suddenly, a message came from his wife Sania on Janet's phone. Tina realized that John was cheating on her. Thus, Tina sat quietly for a while. On the other hand, Tina's phone was with John. So John saw all of Tina's messages which were from that rich boy. Then both of them knew the truth about each other's cheating.

Meanwhile, Sania was present at his house at that time and heard all the events. As a result, Sania left the house. Originally, Sania had gone out for a short time for some work. But John did not know that. What happened next

A terrible fight breaks out between them. John calls Tina a traitor, and Tina calls John a "two-timer". In the end, they both realize their mistakes, but the relationship can no longer last. Thus, their relationship is ruined. And John realizes his mistakes and faults.

This story teaches us that love is not just about words and time, but also about truth, trust and a place of concentration. Two-timing not only destroys relationships, but also destroys trust in people.

Thank you all for reading my post


I would like to invite some of my friends to this contest. They are,

@chant @Solayman @uzma4882
@adeljose @m-fdo @abdul-rakib @damithudaya

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Steemit Challenge Season 26 Week-6: Two-timing

Dear @afrinn, below is the detailed assessment of your submission.

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.6/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3Fair
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.3/10

Feedback

  • Your story lost a lot of impact because you started it with intro which is against the rules.

  • Your story went a bit wayward because it left the line of two timing the mental greed but turned towards financial greed.

Moderated By @dove11